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The Fight for Manaphy

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In a certain sea, a young, female Manaphy has to choose a mate. Her chosen one receives a mark and a necklace after having a "date" with her. She first gives this mark to a Buizel. However, that night, she loses her memory of her date with Buizel, and gives the same mark to a Totodile the next day. The day after that, Buizel is training, while getting ready to reunite with her. Meanwhile, the Totodile is nearby, and sees Buizel with the mark and necklace. He is angered by this, of course, because he thinks Buizel's materials are fake. So, the moment Buizel launches an Aqua Jet, he launches his own, too. He moves his mouth just enough to bite the fellow water Pokemon right on the nose...
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Wonderful wonderful! ^^
I love this peice very much! The ways you did the water and the body angles are wondeful! (:
The only flaw I really see is the outline on buizils collar seems a little shakey, and totodiles eyes seem to have a little to much black in his eye.
And some fangs coming out of the totodiles mouth would make it look better to~ ^^

Now exuse me as I fill in extra space.

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